We use $200.00 dollar words instead of $50.00 words to make our stories worth more. For example a $50.00 word could be "happy" and a $200.00 word could be ecstatic. We are learning to write stories that are interesting. We use verbs and adjectives to make our stories more interesting so that our readers to get a picture in their heads.
STORY WRITING
Writing stories can be heaps of fun. Click on the links to get onto a selection of writing worksheets. Write a story using the pictures - you can retell the original story or change wherever you choose too.
RED RIDING HOOD - Write and colour worksheets.
MY CAT MOLLY
STORY WRITING
Writing stories can be heaps of fun. Click on the links to get onto a selection of writing worksheets. Write a story using the pictures - you can retell the original story or change wherever you choose too.
RED RIDING HOOD - Write and colour worksheets.
MY CAT MOLLY
Blake R. wrote his report and published his report using Kidpix. He decided to split his story to make a two page story, then added a title page. Great work Blake.
Written and illustrated by Caitlin.
Kia ora Maia
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you sharing your story. I like how you used verbs in your story. I love banana ice cream and I bet it was very tasty.
Oliver and Miss McGinnis
there are some very good pictures on here!
ReplyDeleteLove the stories, cant wait for summer!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job these children have done with their writing. The artwork is amazing.
ReplyDeleteThese are fantastic stories!!!
ReplyDeleteI like Harrys story about the bird. i bet it was loud when the bird was cherping out your window Harry? From Maia
ReplyDeleteI like how you described how the worms moved. I think worms are great because they help the environment.
ReplyDeleteI like how you labelled your worm. Now I know more about them. I love your kidpix art work. Did you do it all yourself?
ReplyDeleteGood story about the birds out your window. I have dogs that annoy me in the morning with there loud bark.
ReplyDeleteHi Caitlin at my school we also have sports I enjoy playing sports with my friends. do you like playing sports with your friends?
ReplyDeleteYes I like sports. My favorite sport is netball.
DeleteCaitlin
I do love you story about Molly our cat Jack. I am very rpoud of you. You done a wonderful job on the Ipads at school.
ReplyDeleteLove the story about Molly the stinky cat!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic stories.
ReplyDeleteI like all of the cool pictures :)
ReplyDeleteGreat pictures i could,t do them.
ReplyDeleteGreat storys
ReplyDeleteWow Room 3! These purakau are amazing! You are really thinking about using interesting words to make your writing more interesting! Your pictures really jump off the page too.
ReplyDeleteTeam Totara (R7) Myross Bush School really enjoyed reading these.