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Monday, May 17, 2010
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Reuben, you have used a very good story. Your story uses verbs and some adjectives which is what you are learning about in writing stories to make them more interesting.
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I am also very impressed with your story presentation at assembly. You have written a great story.
Tino pai to mahi! Very good work!
We liked your story Reuben. The flax flowers are ataahua (beautiful).
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you used some verbs in your writing.
Brooklyn, Emily and Mrs Gibbs
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Reuben, you have used a very good story. Your story uses verbs and some adjectives which is what you are learning about in writing stories to make them more interesting.
ReplyDeleteI am also very impressed with your story presentation at assembly. You have written a great story.
Tino pai to mahi! Very good work!
Kia ora Room 3
ReplyDeleteGreat blog - keep up the great work
Kai Pai
Joanne & Anna
We liked your story Reuben. The flax flowers are ataahua (beautiful).
ReplyDeleteyou used some verbs in your writing.
Brooklyn, Emily and Mrs Gibbs