Thursday, September 23, 2010

Snow is great!

Snow is great! In my opinion snow is fantastic! 
Firstly you can play in the snow, and make an enormous snowman and igloos.
Secondly, you can have snowball fights with your family and friends.
Thirdly, you can sometimes get the day off and have a sled ride behind the motorbike. 


By Jardon, Ike and Hayden


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2 comments:

  1. Gabrielle CannySeptember 23, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    Wow I agree with you guys! Snow is great. It's awesome to see you using your excellent persuasive writing skills to convince others. Keep it up!

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  2. Makarewa SchoolSeptember 24, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Thanks Miss Canny for your comment on our persuasive writing. We found that persuasive writing can be hard because we needed to read lots to find out information to help us back up our opinions. However, we now know that to write a piece of persuasive writing we use conjunctions to join sentences, we write our own opinions and back up why we think this, we use adjectives and verbs to describe and we use words like firstly, secondly, thirdly and lastly.

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Thursday, September 23, 2010

Snow is great!

Snow is great! In my opinion snow is fantastic! 
Firstly you can play in the snow, and make an enormous snowman and igloos.
Secondly, you can have snowball fights with your family and friends.
Thirdly, you can sometimes get the day off and have a sled ride behind the motorbike. 


By Jardon, Ike and Hayden


Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. Gabrielle CannySeptember 23, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    Wow I agree with you guys! Snow is great. It's awesome to see you using your excellent persuasive writing skills to convince others. Keep it up!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Makarewa SchoolSeptember 24, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Thanks Miss Canny for your comment on our persuasive writing. We found that persuasive writing can be hard because we needed to read lots to find out information to help us back up our opinions. However, we now know that to write a piece of persuasive writing we use conjunctions to join sentences, we write our own opinions and back up why we think this, we use adjectives and verbs to describe and we use words like firstly, secondly, thirdly and lastly.

    ReplyDelete

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