Thursday, November 4, 2010

My Lamb Katie

My lamb Katie is funny, because she bounces around. Katie likes to suck your finger and she likes cuddles. 
Katie is white, with a cute tail. She eats grass and milk.
I got Katie from dad's friend last term.
I took Katie to pet day at school. Katie won a ticket for the lamb drinking race. I was very proud of her.


By Jamie Laurie     

2 comments:

  1. I like your story and how you told us about what Katie eats and drinks.

    Corbyn

    ReplyDelete
  2. We like how you use $200.00 words to make your story interesting. You also used adjectives to describe Katie and verbs to tell us what she can do.
    Ka pai Jamie!

    ReplyDelete

Thursday, November 4, 2010

My Lamb Katie

My lamb Katie is funny, because she bounces around. Katie likes to suck your finger and she likes cuddles. 
Katie is white, with a cute tail. She eats grass and milk.
I got Katie from dad's friend last term.
I took Katie to pet day at school. Katie won a ticket for the lamb drinking race. I was very proud of her.


By Jamie Laurie     

2 comments:

  1. I like your story and how you told us about what Katie eats and drinks.

    Corbyn

    ReplyDelete
  2. We like how you use $200.00 words to make your story interesting. You also used adjectives to describe Katie and verbs to tell us what she can do.
    Ka pai Jamie!

    ReplyDelete