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Sunday, February 13, 2011
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Great story Hannah. I liked how you began your story. It made me want to read your story to find out why you had a fantastic holiday. You also used adjectives to describe parts of your story. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHannah I really enjoyed your story. I liked the way you include lots of things that you did and the way you used words like bumped and fantastic.It keep me interested.
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Great story Hannah. I liked how you began your story. It made me want to read your story to find out why you had a fantastic holiday. You also used adjectives to describe parts of your story. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHannah I really enjoyed your story. I liked the way you include lots of things that you did and the way you used words like bumped and fantastic.It keep me interested.
ReplyDeleteyou have done a fantastice ending by Hamish
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