Written and recorded by Kaycee.
Kaycee wrote this story about a dog named Star. He loves bubbles. She had written the story and then rewrote her story changing some of her words for new interesting words. Kaycee is working on writing her stories to make a picture in her readers head.
Did Kaycee help you see a picture in your head of Star jumping and catching bubbles?
Leave a comment and tell Kaycee why you liked her story.
Tequin, I like it, and I think you could call STAR, "ROCK STAR", and he would rock and pop the bubbles.
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Great Story, Harry enjoyed watching this very much, Well Done Kaycee
ReplyDeleteGreat story Kaycee. I like how you took some ideas from Tequin's photo and wrote about Star his dog. You used some very good adjectives to make your story more interesting. You are also learning that stories need to be rewritten if required. So your rereading and rewriting is helping you to become a better writer.
ReplyDeleteTino pai!!
from Miss McGinnis
I liked how you used those fantastic adjectives like brilliant sparkling bubbles. I can see brilliant sparkling bubbles in my head.
ReplyDeletefrom Jadine, Mason and Maia.
Great story Kaycee. Star loves playing with the bubbles. It's her favourite game.
ReplyDeleteTequin - I would really like to meet Star one day. I wonder if she would play with bubbles for me.
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I like how you used adjectives in the story Kaycee.
ReplyDeleteI loved it, great description!
ReplyDeleteit is good learning in room 3 because it fun and the other kids are fun to play with.
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