Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Sunday, September 23, 2012
4 comments:
I like how you have used beautiful colourful flowers in your story. It makes me imagine that the flowers smell really nice.
ReplyDelete
From LauraI love the way that you imagined in your head that you would love to live in a castle. I liked how you used adjectives to write your story. GREAT STORY JADINE!
ReplyDelete
From Lydia.Jadine, I liked how you used describing words like colourful, huge and beautiful. Your story made me think of spring and how everything is covered in flowers. What is it like to live in a castle?
ReplyDelete
From Ben.Jadine, you made a really good job at writing your story. Your story reminds me of the knight days when sometimes live in castles and they eat lots of food and play olden day music. Next time you could write about your caste having a moat around it. A moat is a ring of water around the castle. If you want to know more about castles, then you can come and talk to me.
ReplyDelete
From Caleb K.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I like how you have used beautiful colourful flowers in your story. It makes me imagine that the flowers smell really nice.
ReplyDeleteFrom Laura
I love the way that you imagined in your head that you would love to live in a castle. I liked how you used adjectives to write your story. GREAT STORY JADINE!
ReplyDeleteFrom Lydia.
Jadine, I liked how you used describing words like colourful, huge and beautiful. Your story made me think of spring and how everything is covered in flowers. What is it like to live in a castle?
ReplyDeleteFrom Ben.
Jadine, you made a really good job at writing your story. Your story reminds me of the knight days when sometimes live in castles and they eat lots of food and play olden day music. Next time you could write about your caste having a moat around it. A moat is a ring of water around the castle. If you want to know more about castles, then you can come and talk to me.
ReplyDeleteFrom Caleb K.