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Sunday, September 23, 2012
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I like how you used adjectives like laughed and swinging in your story. I can see a picture of you laughing out loud in my head.
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From Miss McGinnisI think your story is good because you used some doing words like swinging and laughing.
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From Daniel C.I like how you used "suddenly snapped" in your story because I can visualise the rope suddenly snapping. Terrific story Brooklynn.
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From Caitlin.I liked how you told us the names of the characters and what animal they were because if we haven't seen the movie then we wouldn't know what characters you were writing about. I think the word "snapped" was a great word to use to describe how the rope broke.
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I like how you used adjectives like laughed and swinging in your story. I can see a picture of you laughing out loud in my head.
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I think your story is good because you used some doing words like swinging and laughing.
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I like how you used "suddenly snapped" in your story because I can visualise the rope suddenly snapping. Terrific story Brooklynn.
ReplyDeleteFrom Caitlin.
I liked how you told us the names of the characters and what animal they were because if we haven't seen the movie then we wouldn't know what characters you were writing about. I think the word "snapped" was a great word to use to describe how the rope broke.
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