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Wednesday, September 19, 2012
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Jake, well done on your story retell. You used your own words to retell this story. When you were working on your retell I liked how you decided to use some maori words and also made sure that you used rich language. Your illustrations are well planned and you made sure that these linked in with your storyline. You are now a Sketchbook expert. When you were recording your voice on iMovie, you quickly worked out how the graphic audio worked and used this to inform you of whether your voice recording needed to be more fluent and consistent. Ka pai to mahi, Jake.
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Well done Jake
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Jake, well done. Love mum xx
ReplyDeleteAwesome retell Jake. from Jack Crooks
ReplyDeleteJake, well done on your story retell. You used your own words to retell this story. When you were working on your retell I liked how you decided to use some maori words and also made sure that you used rich language. Your illustrations are well planned and you made sure that these linked in with your storyline. You are now a Sketchbook expert. When you were recording your voice on iMovie, you quickly worked out how the graphic audio worked and used this to inform you of whether your voice recording needed to be more fluent and consistent. Ka pai to mahi, Jake.
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