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Wednesday, September 19, 2012
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I love it Maia!!! Great use of addjectives, what a great poem. Im a wee bit scared too look under my bed now!
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Ohhhh that's a shiver down my spine goblins might nibble my toes tonight hope they don't nibble yours. What would happen if there was a goblin and it wasn't stuck it just lived under your comfy bed and it didn't let you sleep in it what would you do then?
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem about Gringy Goblin. You used adjectives bright green to describe Gingy's head. I like how you used verbs like shivered to tell me how frightened Gringy was. GREAT RHYMING POEM MAIA!!
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I love it Maia!!! Great use of addjectives, what a great poem. Im a wee bit scared too look under my bed now!
ReplyDeleteOhhhh that's a shiver down my spine goblins might nibble my toes tonight hope they don't nibble yours. What would happen if there was a goblin and it wasn't stuck it just lived under your comfy bed and it didn't let you sleep in it what would you do then?
ReplyDeleteThis is such a cool story, I love it. From Jack Crooks
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem about Gringy Goblin. You used adjectives bright green to describe Gingy's head. I like how you used verbs like shivered to tell me how frightened Gringy was. GREAT RHYMING POEM MAIA!!
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